Nikon SLR Cameras

Is this a grammatically correct statement?

Jennifer
Jennifer

"I don't have much experience with zoom lenses and I always considered them more of toy lenses. The only one that is really worth buying is the Nikon 70-200mm f/2.8 but it is expensive."

Jimmy
Jimmy

Yes that's fine, but instead of "much" I'd you "many", because some people consider much as slang.
And, because "it is expensive" is an opinion (as compared to a millionaire), I think you should use "Although, it is quite expensive". Because it shows vocabulary knowledge.
Hope I helped!

zuma
zuma

No. The first sentence should read considered them more Or Less toy lenses.

Salt and Peppy
Salt and Peppy

I cleaned it up for you.
"I don't have much experience with zoom lenses because I have always considered them more of a toy; the only lens that is worth buying is the Nikon 70-200mm f/2.8, but it is expensive."