Is this a correct sentence? (english grammar)?

Alice

"I was obsesed about photography, but soon as my Nikon D3100 arives I will be more obsessed."

Kari

Yes it is

ChicLadySS

But as soon as…

Kebbe

It would make more sense if it was worded "I was obsessed with photography, but as soon as my Nikon D3100 arrives I will be even more obsessed."

On a side note- I just got the Nikon D3100, and I love it! Have fun with it!

Thankyoumam

"I was obsesed (misspelled) about photography, but <as> soon as my Nikon D3100 arives (misspelled) I will be more obsessed."